Rubik’s true colors

November 14, 2008

I like how it feels light, yet solid in my hands.
I like its even, checkered surface,
I twist it, twist it, again and again,
to hear it click beneath my fingers.

I play at this madly sectioned cube,
and its corners and edges, collapse and depart,
in rapid incessant succession, just like,
its center seems to be lost, found, again.

They tell me it is a riot of colors,
waiting to be set straight.
They tell me it teases their brain-
Is it more fun that way?

Entry Filed under: Poetry. Tags: , , , , , , , , , , , , , .

8 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Luscious Lips  |  November 14, 2008 at 5:00 pm

    No.

    It is frustrating.

    Kisses.

  • 2. Anonymous  |  November 14, 2008 at 9:30 pm

    Average.
    Try using meter, rhyming or other things.

  • 3. Arcube  |  November 15, 2008 at 11:39 am

    “Anonymous” is right, also it seems to end abruptly, could do better

  • 4. maverickmana  |  November 15, 2008 at 6:26 pm

    Quite creative!

  • 5. Blogger  |  November 15, 2008 at 7:32 pm

    I liked both ur poem and site’s template
    I think u can put some images along with ur work !

  • 6. Siddharth  |  November 18, 2008 at 12:00 am

    Fantastic… but it would be better if you wrote on a topic that is somewhat more emotional…

  • 7. Peace of Mind in 20  |  December 6, 2008 at 9:16 pm

    Some compelling stuff here and nice writing style…thank you for your efforts!

  • 8. Simple Meditation Techniques  |  December 7, 2008 at 4:07 am

    You have some excellent content and a compelling writing style – keep up the great work!

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